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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Indiana
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Past Good-Bye
I am in such a slump. I havent' been able to write anything for about a month now and it's killing me! Part of it's because a lot of what I wrote stemmed from emotion created by an internal conflict which, though it still exists, has shown resolution. So anyhow...
Well, I know this is off majorly. Maybe someone can say something to throw me back into writing mode. lol. Raindrops break on the windshield And fall in a crooked streak Resembling the pattern Of the tears on my cheek Diamond ring on the dashboard Screams just put the truck in drive You may find an ounce of freedom Beyond the county line One last second guess One more glance in the rearview But all I see in the mirror Are mem'ries of you Gas on the right, push it to the floor Two hands on the wheel to keep it straight 'Cause that northern star I once followed Has gone to grey Faded dreams and wasted years Ol' Chevy take me outta here From zero to sixty five Get me past Good-bye You came as a broken soul Reachin' out to find a heart Then you stole mine as I slept And when I woke up in the dark I only wanted to see the man Who I thought I knew But the twilight shadows revealed The real you Gas on the right, push it to the floor Two hands on the wheel to keep it straight 'Cause that northern star I once followed Has gone to grey Faded dreams and wasted years Ol' Chevy take me outta here From zero to sixty five Get me past Good-bye Gas on the right, push it to the floor Two hands on the wheel to keep it straight 'Cause that northern star I once followed Has gone to grey Faded dreams and wasted years Ol' Chevy take me outta here From zero to sixty five Get me past Good-bye ----------------------------------------- I know I know I know, there's no focus, and no bridge, and it's far from being complete. But you guys have always known what to say to throw me back in the loop. -Chelsey ![]() |
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