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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Central New York
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Way Past Homesick
I know. I know. Another "on the road" song. A little cliche, but I'm just writing from personal experience
Mike Way Past Homesick (Up tempo) Verse I’m way past homesick. There’s nothing I can do. No work at home. So I’ve been gone. But I gotta get back to you. Verse I’m way past homesick. Six months out on the road. You’re stuck at home. I’m all alone. I just gotta have you to hold. Verse I’m way past homesick. I can’t help missin’ you. Missed your birthday. What can I say. Can’t leave til this jobs through. Bridge I didn’t know Homesick was a place on the map. But I think I drove through it ‘bout a thousand miles back. In fact, I’m sure of it. Ha. Ha. Verse I’m way past homesick. Enough of this damn place. Drug up today. I’m on my way. I can’t wait to touch your face. Drug up today. I’m on my way. I can’t wait to see your face. |
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