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Old 06-11-2006, 11:45 AM   #1
Mike O.
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Way Past Homesick

I know. I know. Another "on the road" song. A little cliche, but I'm just writing from personal experience
Mike

Way Past Homesick

(Up tempo)

Verse
I’m way past homesick.
There’s nothing I can do.
No work at home.
So I’ve been gone.
But I gotta get back to you.

Verse
I’m way past homesick.
Six months out on the road.
You’re stuck at home.
I’m all alone.
I just gotta have you to hold.

Verse
I’m way past homesick.
I can’t help missin’ you.
Missed your birthday.
What can I say.
Can’t leave til this jobs through.

Bridge
I didn’t know Homesick was a place on the map.
But I think I drove through it ‘bout a thousand miles back.
In fact, I’m sure of it. Ha. Ha.

Verse
I’m way past homesick.
Enough of this damn place.
Drug up today.
I’m on my way.
I can’t wait to touch your face.

Drug up today.
I’m on my way.
I can’t wait to see your face.
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