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Lyric Re-Writes Have you RE-Written a song that has already been critiqued in one of the "Lyric Forums?" Please try to wait at least ONE WEEK before posting it in the Re-Write forum. This will help ensure that you get Fresh Feedback from the members; and, to make sure you give yourself a chance to set aside your lyric for a few days after a re-write and come back to it with a fresh perspective before you post it again. Be sure to post the first song version along with your Re-write for comparison!

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02-08-2010, 02:19 PM

melodyroad

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Join Date: Feb 2008

Location: Suffolk, England

Posts: 843

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Originally Posted by Cheryl Moon

No matter how you tweak it Henny, its a very well written piece
and the nuances will come about when you begin to sing it comfortably.

That's very kind Cheryl. I hope so. I think I have something going for the hook, musically. Trying to work backward from that =0S

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Originally Posted by Cheryl Moon

Maybe its a girl thing... I wrote one in this theme too.

I searched, and it seems to be a popular hook. But I'd love to see yours

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